In the morning of Christmas my brothers and I woke ever body
in the family up. And Matthew was the first to open a present and it was Lego.
And my favourite present was a tablet and my favourite game is Angry birds go.
Dad got a remote control car which was a F1 car. MY Brother’s, mum and I bought
it for him. And Ryan’s favourite present was my present that I got for him
which was a Smiggle bendy line. And mum got a slushy machine. And for lunch we had ham, prawns, terkey with
cranberry sauce, pineapple, beetroot, and salad. And the kids drink’s were
Fanta and water. And the grownup drink’s
were wine and water. And it was delicious. My favourite food their was prawns
and terkey with cranberry sauce. And with lunch we had bonbons. And in the
afternoon we did a puzzle and it was a puzzle of Australia. And it was fun. And
for dinner we had leftovers, it was delicious. For desert we had coloured
ice-cream. And we went to bed. And that was Christmas.
THE END
Great work Ben. Love your recount and your blog design. Very proud buddy. Love Mum xx
ReplyDeleteWay to go Ben I really liked reading about your Christmas Day. The favourite part of my Christmas was the Prawns Yum Yum. Keep up the great work looking forward to the next instalment.
ReplyDeleteGreat recount Ben. I liked that you talked about your favourite presents, what your brothers got for Christmas and what you ate for lunch. This is a great start to you blog and look forward to see many more of them and to watch the improvement. Keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteLove Dad
P.S. Love the page design.
P.P.S. I fed the fish. :)
I really enjoyed your recount Ben. Keep up the good work!!!! I look forward to many more blogs in the future. As a matter of interest I think you had better tell us what happened at your place on New Year's Eve. Love Nanna R xxxxxxx
ReplyDeleteWell doneben I look forward to reading more of your life
ReplyDeleteHi Ben,
ReplyDeleteGreat work.Eli would be very jealous that you have Angry Birds Go. In your next blog try not to start any sentences with the word and. Your sentences will be just as good without and at the start. I will be checking back to see what you have created. A Jackie
Did you feed my fish? If you did thank you.
ReplyDeleteheyo Ben
ReplyDeletei really liked your writing! it was pretty awesome! good job benny, sounds like you had a fun christmas!!!
bye bye, kayla
What a great recount of Christmas, Ben!! Wow, you really have grown up to be able to write like this!! What a fun day!
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